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Creative Writing, Haiku, Writing

To the Trespassers

Bite It Like a Bulldog

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You´re like a bulldog
trespassing my hearts deepest
mold of unfulfilled

wishes, dreams, fantasies,
of the life I never had
never saw, never…

just leaving me bare
to suffer in a world that
contains of no more

than weeping.


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2 thoughts on “To the Trespassers

  1. When I read the first line, I though oho this is funny. But when I reached the last line a tingle passed long my spine. You are able to evoke different emotions in a single composition.

    Posted by Vinaya Ghimire (@Vinaya_Ghimire) | March 1, 2012, 2:10 pm
    • Vinaya Ghimire,
      I am really happy you liked this pice of prose. It is very personal, and I appreciate that you took your self time both to read it and to gee such a great feedback.
      It´s fun when I can delude the reader like this 🙂

      Posted by Magdalena Wiklund | March 1, 2012, 7:52 pm

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