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The Walls


Wall.. (Photo credit: Niels Linneberg)

The Walls surrounding me from all directions,
dumb borders that confines my life into nothing;

a false softness
sweet words of pink chewing gum
… bubbling…
sticks to my soul
a stone that hones itself into my flesh

step by step
breath by breath
hour after hour
– the minutes are passing by as we speak!

while I´m crossing streets of pain
from anger into weeping
and from weeping to non-speaking


You just wait… just wait…
…till I break.


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2 thoughts on “The Walls

  1. What a compelling piece. You write from your soul and it shows in all your scribe. I am very impressed. Your words rocked me and I was very delighted and captured till the end.

    Posted by Vincent Moore | March 18, 2012, 12:20 am
    • Dear Vincent Moore,
      Thanks You, Thank You, Thank You, for your warm and kind feedback. I´m doing my best to become a good writer, and times like this – when a great writer gives me the feedback you just gave me – it really feels as if I´m on my way. What a boost you just gave me!
      Thanks again,

      Posted by Magdalena Wiklund | March 18, 2012, 12:29 am

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